Critique my craigslist ad

[Wifezilla]

Would you buy from me?

http://cosprings.craigslist.org/grd/1599390599.html

Trying to get the girls to pay for their own feed

 

[abifae]

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[Wifezilla]

LOLOL

 

[The Vail Benton's]

I would buy them! Knowing the names of the ducks who provide me breakfast is a big plus! And quail eggs are nummy too! Good ad - I hope it brings you some business!!!

 

[Wifezilla]

Not trying to get rich or anything, but it would be nice to recoup the cost of feed

Still, it is way cheaper to feed 5 ducks and 4 quail than it is to feed 3 cats

I figured adding some pics and the duck's names might help. There are a few chicken egg sellers, but I think I am the only one posting duck and quail eggs.

 

[The Vail Benton's]

I sold chicken eggs last year - It all went into a jar labeled "Egg Money" (clever, huh? LOL) I didn't sell eggs regularly, just whenever someone wanted some - just now and again - I was suprised to open the jar last fall to count out over $100 dollars... and that ain't chicken feed! (well, technically, it was, but you get my point!)

 

[Dace]

Great ad Wifey, I'd buy from you!

 

[ksalvagno]

The ad sounds great and I would buy but I think if a yuppie city person saw feeder fish, worms and all the bugs, they might get turned off. Even though we all know that is VERY good for them.

City people understand "free range" and that is about it (at least in my area). I don't think they really realize that that includes eating bugs and digging through other animal's poop (at least for chickens) and other things. But it depends on your audience.

 

[Wifezilla]

I think if a yuppie city person saw feeder fish, worms and all the bugs, they might get turned off. Even though we all know that is VERY good for them.

You do have a point, but hopefully Colorado city folk aren't as wussy as East Coast city folk!

 

[SKR8PN]

Would you buy from me?

I dunno...............can we trust you?



Just Kidding!! Great add!