Critique my craigslist ad

[big brown horse]

She's trying to dabble your camera! How cute!

I just learned the term "dabble". I have a drake Rouen that dabbles my pants legs...so sweet!

 

[freemotion]

So cute!!!!

 

[FarmerChick]

Would you buy from me?

http://cosprings.craigslist.org/grd/1599390599.html

Trying to get the girls to pay for their own feed

That is good except one thing---I despise the word gross. Gross brings bad thoughts into my head. LOL

I would use the word nasty instead. Nasty is low key gross version...LOL

Good ad definitely.

 

[Dace]

I love you blog....the pics are great! I am following you too

 

[Wifezilla]

There is a regional component to terms for sure